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Soup for the soul

I wrote this at a time when I was still struggling after being betrayed by my ex. My poetry has helped me to heal. It reveals elements of my soul, and I hope resonates with you:

My emotions are like soup, a metaphor

So perfect in it’s comparison and more

Philosophical still. A mixture of things

Coming together as one. It brings

hope that just like the ingredients in this pan

Can be reflected in my own ability to understand.

Mixed, blended, smoothed like silk, it

Nourishes, warms, provides, and bit by bit

I start to feel whole again. Life. A short thing

That, given it passes quickly. I want to be

Happy, I wish to be healed, I long to be free.

Like soup, I wished only to bring you the complete

Comfort that it brings, to make you feel replete

With my warmth, my kindness, my love. 

This is all I ever wanted, and above

All else, I wished only for you to want me again.

Comments (45)

Diana, 26

17 Dec 2025

A heartfelt metaphor for healing and recovery. The way you liken emotions to soup is creative and comforting, showing the power of introspection and self-expression. 
Mariia, 22

03 Jul 2025

This poem is incredibly tender. The metaphor of soup is unexpectedly profound. I felt the pain, hope, and warmth in your words. Thank you for sharing a piece of your soul! 
Antonina, 21

17 Sep 2024

Thanks for sharing this story. If you want to discuss this or other topics, I'm here to listen. 
Yuliia, 21

16 Aug 2024

Your poem is beautifully introspective and heartfelt. It’s powerful how you've used the metaphor of soup to express the process of healing and the desire for connection and understanding. It sounds like writing has been a meaningful way for you to navigate your emotions and find solace. Thank you for sharing it with me. If you’d like to discuss more about your poetry or anything else, I’m here to listen. 
Anna, 21

07 Mar 2024

It is interesting to read such poems, which help to distract from problems. It is very inspiring. 
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